Assessing Poetry Exam Essays

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After reading the two essays, make a list of observations. What was done well? What wasn’t? Make sure you structure it according to the following formatting. For example:

Poem 1 – “The Jaguar”

Things done well

  • thesis is clear and frequently referred to
  • language is sophisticated

Things not done well

  • needs more cohesive ties
  • spelling is a problem

Lastly, what grade would you give each of them?

“Life-Cycle”

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Paying close attention to your structure (TEEL), write an analytical paragraph about “Life-Cycle”. Be as insightful as you can. Also, make sure you link to your thesis!!

Thesis: Throughout their poetry, poets arouse their readers’ interest in aspects of life, including personal experiences and public issues, incorporating both connotations and denotations to do so.

I Wandered Lonely As A Cloud

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I wandered lonely as a cloud

I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o’er vales and hills,
When all at once I saw a crowd,
A host, of golden daffodils;
Beside the lake, beneath the trees,
Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.

Continuous as the stars that shine
And twinkle on the milky way,
They stretched in never-ending line
Along the margin of a bay:
Ten thousand saw I at a glance,
Tossing their heads in sprightly dance.

The waves beside them danced; but they
Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:
A poet could not but be gay,
In such a jocund company:
I gazed—and gazed—but little thought
What wealth the show to me had brought:

For oft, when on my couch I lie
In vacant or in pensive mood,
They flash upon that inward eye
Which is the bliss of solitude;
And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils.

William Wordsworth
 
Explain what this poem is about – in 100 words or less.  This is about developing your skill at working out the subject of a poem.